Friday 27 May 2016

W4 Reflection

Writing
This week I have been Writing a Charlotte's Web article. I think it was very hard but then it got easier as I went on sometimes I got stuck and stopped for a while.
                               
Charlotte’s Web article


One morning a stupid man named Lurvy found a web with the words some pig written in it, only one person knows if Charlotte wrote the words at that is fern. Fern is Wilbur’s best friend, Wilbur met Charlotte in Mr Zuckermans big red barn.   


Lurvy was the one who found the web, Charlotte was the one who made the web, Mr Zuckerman was the one who owned the barn, Wilbur was Charlotte’s good friend, Fern was Wilbur’s best friend.  


The web with words about Wilbur, the words, Some pig had actually stopped the Zuckerman’s from killing and eating Wilbur. Mr Zuckerman wanted to show of Wilbur to the public so he got Lurvy to build a big crate for Wilbur.   

Mr Zuckerman’s barn was quiet that morning when Charlotte made the new web that said terrific her new web would hopefully stop Mr Zuckerman from trying to kill Wilbur everybody in the barn thought it was amazing, We think                                   
Early in the morning 100 years ago Charlotte wove a web of words that said Some Pig no one knows if it was Charlotte’s web, only Wilbur and Fern know for sure and they say that it was Charlotte’s web no one else could have owned it and wrote the words.  



Numeracy
In maths we have been recording our selves with Screencastify. We have been working on some very hard questions like 28 x 5 = 140 and using rounding compensation multiplication and counting in 5s.








Reading
This week for reading I did retell the story we were reading a few books like Shark in the bath. My goal for next week is to retell the story instead of just sitting there doing nothing.






1 comment:

  1. Hi Ry! Well done with your Charlotte's Web writing, you sure have a lot of detail. Next week we will look at changing it from a recount to an article.
    Your reflections are great, they say what you are learning and how you have felt about your new learning. Next week try to set next steps.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.